{"id":6520,"date":"2024-02-18T19:56:42","date_gmt":"2024-02-19T01:56:42","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/?p=6520"},"modified":"2025-05-01T01:33:11","modified_gmt":"2025-05-01T06:33:11","slug":"study-finds-writing-workshop-feedback-from-kyle-unhelpful","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/2024\/02\/18\/study-finds-writing-workshop-feedback-from-kyle-unhelpful\/","title":{"rendered":"Study Finds Writing Workshop Feedback from Kyle &#8220;Unhelpful&#8221;"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A study conducted in Beginner\u2019s Poetry Workshop has ultimately declared feedback from Kyle, a student in the Monday\/Wednesday section, to be ineffective at improving the quality of the work of a fellow student, Phoebe Brinston.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u201cThe only annotations he made were the word \u2018LAME\u2019 in giant letters and doodles of what I think was Chance the Rapper eating a sandwich in the margins. The poem was about the death of my grandmother,\u201d said Brinston.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Alongside his written annotations, Phoebe claimed Kyle often interrupts discussions to provide more generalized feedback. \u201cHe claimed that Ernest Hemmingway always said \u2018to write drunk, edit sober \u2013 which makes sense. I saw him typing a Canvas discussion post during the Alpha Delt party.\u201d\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">When asked for comment, Kyle stated, \u201cThe written word is a difficult skill to master. I do my best to provide honest feedback that will help my peers ascend to their best poetic self. That said, sometimes my comments might appear overly harsh if I personally felt that the poem sucked dick, balls, ass, and cock.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>A study conducted in Beginner\u2019s Poetry Workshop has ultimately declared feedback from Kyle, a student in the Monday\/Wednesday section, to be ineffective at improving the quality of the work of a fellow student, Phoebe Brinston.\u00a0<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2080,"featured_media":6523,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[13],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6520"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2080"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=6520"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6520\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":6525,"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6520\/revisions\/6525"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/6523"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=6520"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=6520"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/chicagoshadydealer.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=6520"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}